Hey shaneyney!! :) okay, well first off, I think your poster is really creative! I can see what your trying to do and I think that your layering and graphics really help the effect of your poster. Its not clustered together so its more simple which is good:) I agree that you should, however, put pictures of you progresssing over time. I think that'll be pretty neat!:) Another thing is the fonts, remember what ms.sueoka said about how fonts can really effect your poster. So maybe you wanna mess around with that? Overall, goodjob! and I hope you do good on this:)
i like this graphic because... -the colors match well together, nothing that makes my eyes sore (: -it is a very important concept that is portrayed in ONLY 6 words (kay, 13 if you count the pictures' words!! (plus pictures) -it shows the various hardships and decisions most average teens eventually do face -it reminds me of 'The Map' from Dora the explorer... :D
the only thing i can think of adding/changing is to add maybe one or two more happy things... besides just the friends (beginning) and the happy dude (end), because life isn't just about the hard things, right? altho the guy between the 'good' n 'bad' sign is very good, keep it (:
Like your teammates, I enjoyed the poster :) I'm glad you're going to add a pic of yourself...I would actually add others, too...so that you can still keep the great "map" format and metaphor but can personalize it more.
Hey shaneyney!! :)
ReplyDeleteokay, well first off, I think your poster is really creative! I can see what your trying to do and I think that your layering and graphics really help the effect of your poster. Its not clustered together so its more simple which is good:) I agree that you should, however, put pictures of you progresssing over time. I think that'll be pretty neat!:) Another thing is the fonts, remember what ms.sueoka said about how fonts can really effect your poster. So maybe you wanna mess around with that? Overall, goodjob! and I hope you do good on this:)
SHANEIKAAAAA :D
ReplyDeletei like this graphic because...
-the colors match well together, nothing that makes my eyes sore (:
-it is a very important concept that is portrayed in ONLY 6 words (kay, 13 if you count the pictures' words!! (plus pictures)
-it shows the various hardships and decisions most average teens eventually do face
-it reminds me of 'The Map' from Dora the explorer... :D
the only thing i can think of adding/changing is to add maybe one or two more happy things... besides just the friends (beginning) and the happy dude (end), because life isn't just about the hard things, right?
altho the guy between the 'good' n 'bad' sign is very good, keep it (:
-korie
Hi Shaneika,
ReplyDeleteLike your teammates, I enjoyed the poster :)
I'm glad you're going to add a pic of yourself...I would actually add others, too...so that you can still keep the great "map" format and metaphor but can personalize it more.
Good job!
mrs s